Leslie feedback

Leslie feedback week 9

Section 1

1 Postcard on the right of intro

Intro make columns wider

More stickers to represent the values that randomly get placed on objects

2 fix margins

3 postcards - larger ones on the left, grid on the right to add a sense of scale

4 Diana bigger

5 quote nexto breakfast postcard

6 magnet nexto black and white turnstile

7 add another grid of something in first section

8 try hello kitty bigger

9 put two objects nexto eachother with a comparison between them and make bigger

10 mind the gap goes nexto hello kitty

11 move art museum gift shop down, test out three lines

Section 2

1 Tate should be it’s own section

2 rubber and ball side by side

3 larger image on one side and grid on the left

4 integrate quotes to support images

5 try more double page spreads

6 more grids and objects nexto the images

7 postcards keep straight other than when they’re on their own

8 do something on tote bags

Cover

1 scans of paper bags with postcard behind it not revealed yet or bottle opener

2 try without type

Research & Process